I think you should just take a minute and just enjoy the fact the the US gave you citizenship. Ranting and raving and sending up your blood pressure will not fix the issues that are going on. You must understand that Mr. Obama gained a nation that was already in trouble. I am not making excuses for Mr. Obama or anyone, but Rome was not built in a day so America’s issues will not fix in a day. This nation belongs to us and we need to work together as a collective group to ensure our future and stop pointing fingers. One man cannot build the city by himself it will take all of us to build the city.
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Just seen your 1st question,water is in fan shorting timer board,get it replaced,look at outside grille,can rain water get in?
If so get a gravity grille with flaps that open when fan is running.

Thesis statement should have the devices, effect, and author’s purpose. Simply stating what the author uses is boring, and it’s vague. Your thesis should tell the reader what those devices do. (Effects of imagery include arousing emotion, describing, illustrating an abstraction, etc.) Personally, I dislike the one-sentence thesis, because it limits the degree of style you can put into your writing.

In your first body paragraph, be sure to quote what is actually important. Since you are talking about descriptive words, those descriptive words should be in quotes, preferably integrated into your analysis. Also, try not to use evidence in the topic sentence of your paragraphs. If you do that, then you are promising to ONLY talk about those bits of evidence in your entire paragraph. Your paragraph is talking about WORDS, and only WORDS, so dont quote sentences. Only talk about the individual words, and how they contribute to the author’s purpose. Dont summarize.

The second body paragraph has some issues as well. You have a stand-alone quote that is neither integrated into your analysis nor an example of the rhetorical device you are discussing. Once again, you are talking about rhetorical questions. Please stick to that.

Overall, your writing could be much more concise. I’m being honest…there’s a lot of work to be done here.
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The media enjoyed the most during that time was the radio. We would sit together and listen to talk shows and afterwards discuss it among ourselves. “I hardly can remember the radio shows, its been a long time.” Al-Hamely stated. The relationships were stronger and smallest things brought the whole community together. “If any of us caught a big fish, we would create an uproar that would attract other people and give us applause for our hard work,” he said.

We used to eat breakfast, lunch, and dinner together. Sometimes men would cook and serve to others and sometimes we would get it from other people living in our compound. Today, we barely get to see our children because of the attention of the media.

We used to eat the simplest food such as dates, rice, water and a normal curry. We got dates imported from Al-Basra in Iraq and other provisions from other Arab countries. Our life was simple and much more humbler compared to some youth today.

We were the happiest people I would say at that time. We used to enjoy each moment and would openly thank God for his favor upon us.

However, when oil was discovered, our lifestyle began to change. We got richer and television began to spread. Regardless, not many people spent their time watching TV or listening to the radio anymore, we gave more importance to making our lives better and improving our kinship
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